TOPIC: HAPPY FAMILY
Once upon a time there was a lovely couple name Anne and Paulo they really love one another and they
don’t want to leave the other one at home they both went together to do what they want to do. Anne was
pregnant and she gave birth to a handsome baby boy’s name Andrew. When the boy grew up he was
writing a story about his parents and his life because he travels around the world.
Hi Mommy I’m so happy and excited when I saw you and daddy happy and do your work together.
Every time and everyday I woke up I felt so good and happy why? Because I grew up in a happy family
and also in a family that don’t care about problems in work and school we solve our problems together
and we give people chances to apologise.
Every time and everyday I woke up I felt so good and happy why? Because I grew up in a happy family
and also in a family that don’t care about problems in work and school we solve our problems together
and we give people chances to apologise.
I met a pretty and a lovely girl in my high school her name is Grace she is a smart girl and she have a
family like ours so it good to know her. She said she wants to meet you mommy and daddy. She likes
eating healthy food like me and I’m really happy. That is the end of the writing. Then after he wrote the
letter he sent it and then he went back home.His parents doesn’t know that there son is coming back.
family like ours so it good to know her. She said she wants to meet you mommy and daddy. She likes
eating healthy food like me and I’m really happy. That is the end of the writing. Then after he wrote the
letter he sent it and then he went back home.His parents doesn’t know that there son is coming back.
“ Hello, anybody home? “ Andrew ask, but Anne is cooking and his dad is working outside.
“ OMG, honey your son is here “ his mum shouted and surprise. Paulo run as fast as he can because
he wants to give his son a big hug.
he wants to give his son a big hug.
“ Where is my son? “ the father asked,
“ Hi dad “ Andrew answered,
But dad has a little bit confused because his son left him at 10 years so he didn’t remember the face of
his son.
his son.
“ Honey your son is standing in front of you “ mommy said
“ No he is not, he looks like a stranger, look at his hair and his clothes,” dad answered with anger
“ Dad this is me I’ve changed because I left you 10 ten years ago, I graduated and I got a certificate
I’m tall and I look like a stranger because wear expensive clothes, Dad I got my own money to buy
anything I want so fine if you don’t want then fine I go and find somewhere else to stay “, the kid was very
sad and talk back to his father
I’m tall and I look like a stranger because wear expensive clothes, Dad I got my own money to buy
anything I want so fine if you don’t want then fine I go and find somewhere else to stay “, the kid was very
sad and talk back to his father
“ Son no please your dad is very confused please stay with us “ mum said
“ No, I thought we are a happy family but now everything is changed why? “
“ Because you leave us alone, we suffered because we don’t have money to buy food and anything we
want, but sad we heard news that you spend time on your project and you spend a lot of money doing
your job but you didn’t remember us, you only wrote that letter because you know you are coming,
WOW now I see “ dad answer his son
want, but sad we heard news that you spend time on your project and you spend a lot of money doing
your job but you didn’t remember us, you only wrote that letter because you know you are coming,
WOW now I see “ dad answer his son
“ Dad I don’t care that is not your business to judge me, why your not happy I’m here you should happy
I’m here to buy anything you want. Your lucky you have a rich son like me “ Andrew said
I’m here to buy anything you want. Your lucky you have a rich son like me “ Andrew said
“ 😭😭😭 son listen to me I am your mother the reason why we are not happy like before your dad is not
feeling well sick we got the report from the doctor that he got cancer “ mum was crying and talk to his
son
feeling well sick we got the report from the doctor that he got cancer “ mum was crying and talk to his
son
“ What! Dad is this true?, I’m very sorry dad, please forgive me “ son was crying and ask for forgiveness
“ I’m sorry too son that was my fault for not remembering you but now I know my real and my humble
son, thanks for apologising son “ dad forgive his son
son, thanks for apologising son “ dad forgive his son
“ Yeah we are a happy family again “ said mum
Aw, great writing here, Iemaima.
ReplyDeleteYou've used dialogue well and have described your characters' emotions.
I liked how you ended the story with the same words from the title.
As a next step you should try writing with a simile or metaphor.